I am a young man from Revelstoke, B.C. I joined this website to share the poetry I have been writing my whole life. Please leave critique and input, I am not easily offended.
Due regards, Daniel.
Revelstoke
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- When God Makes You Wait -
Struggle is abundant from the start to the finish, and a head start is irrelevant when you're in an intermission with a heavy head, a broken heart and fractions of a soul, it's not hard to see how we forget our roles because as life's weight grows and there's a raise in the stakes, its oftentimes hard to see why God makes you wait but take that time to grow, and take that time to heal, and when the path has been cleared, your way will be revealed take heed to recall the graces in life, there's going to be… Read Full Story »
- The Sky -
we all could leave the old world and start life anew but it's not that easy when the ghost's after you watch where your feet land and where you lay shoes cause soon enough and sure as trust it will be time to choose have a faithful heart, and a watchful eye, that's if you want a chance cause the sinful nature's takes any route inside you to advance hold your head up high, toward the sky and try to just conceive a life without all the things that make it harder to believe remember being young, having fun, and… Read Full Story »
- The Man Without Jewels -
All of the marionette's deepest regrets spill forth like the waves on the rocks of the inlet where I sit, where I wish, and where I can get reminiscent memories of the time we met the places that we went, sin's i've yet to repent piling up like death wishes and letters unsent but addressed completely, clearly, and penned with great care I scream out to God, he's got to hear me somewhere [stanza break] poison's dripping off the fangs of a snake in the grass tryin' not to crack up, but I can never run fast enough to get… Read Full Story »
- Saint's Virtue -
patience, the virtue of the saints and those who wait destiny, the kind that's better known as fate be the kind of person that the world should like to have be grateful for your punishments, for those have shaped your path relinquish bitter solitude, regarded as vengeful thought hold hope inside your heart for all the joy that you once saught [Stanza Break] what greater gift is gratitude? find beauty in ineptitude as all moments are fleeting, fault gives to our lives meaning Read Full Story »
- I, myself, am surely One -
i've taken inhibition and i've placed it in a row possesions, past and future, always wreeking ever so but pain cannot be held onto, it must be tossed aside for those who live in tainted pasts will surely see demise alas, how things are brought about in good faith in their time a tragedy, as you can see, most people, they are blind and i, myself, am surely one, patience i have lacked my wicked tongue and lack of strength have always held me back i cant believe the times at hand, such contrast in their essence such beauty and… Read Full Story »
- Soulfire -
Soulfire burn, until your flames are put out climb higher please, and never ever doubt your own existence, because you keep us alive you embers keep us warm and your love defines divine [Stanza Break] It's all for you, Soulfire, you're all I trust in this life I crave you like cigarettes and need you like, right now and in this time, without hesitation or delay so be with me Soulfire, ignite my every day [Stanza Break] Because beauty is skin deep, but Soulfire is an aura incomparable, indescribable, yet continually I search for a way to explain the joys… Read Full Story »


